Title Screen Test

After finding a interesting tutorial online at Videocopilot, I came up with a few ideas for my own intro title screen for my film. The tutorial shows how to make a really authentic looking title screen with a crumbling effect reveling a text layer upon a wall.

Heres a look at the tutorial: http://www.youtube.com/user/gezashot?feature=mhum

I had a go at my own version, using a sample image I shot of stone from my outside ramp. I think the effect is prity cool, however I dont plan to use this in my final peace.
My final Title Screen looked quite nice, but I plan to use the techniques learnt from the above tutorial to create a better title screen, for my new idea I basically want to have what will look like an old rusty pipe with broken paint on it, a deep noise will play, or maybe even a bullet ricocheting and the pipe will vibrate, knocking of the old flaking paint, reveling my projects title. Thats the plan anyway. Heres what my first test looked like;